
Identifying the muse at table 12
It is dinner time and the place is packed, mostly with tourists I would guess, drawn in by the sign at the entrance proclaiming “Birthplace of Harry Potter.”
It is dinner time and the place is packed, mostly with tourists I would guess, drawn in by the sign at the entrance proclaiming “Birthplace of Harry Potter.”
…the napkin note is not forbidden. It has long been a secret passage into my children’s hearts.
…between paragraphs, I am changing out loads of laundry, taking the dog for a walk and making a shopping list…
That last sentence took me an hour and 23 minutes to write and rewrite. Will I keep it? Maybe. Maybe not. Noted in margin: fix this.
“I could see the end, but I couldn’t force them [my characters] there. They had to work it out. And, finally, they did.”